I have something on paper

...normally i would call it a first draft. This one has a start and an end but does it have anything of use imbetween. I hope so. Lucy will tell me.
Anyway, i decided that i would go in a slightly different direction. I think we all talk quite nobely about the reasons behind gun crime and how destructive it is, but i think for all the talk there is very little action. I have used this as the basis for my piece.
I'm going to read it again tomorrow when hopefully all the lines will have stopped blurring into one. Or that could be just the fact i need glasses and it will still be the same. Anyway i have something completed that i can work with.
Goodnight/morning...